Parappa Rappa
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Comick
I liked your mini trailer of Parappa. Haha it looks like a revenge story hmm? You did a nice array of angles to build up tension, but I suggest you try using better music. The matrix music is very cliche and everyone has heard it. Perhaps better shading and drawings would help too. Some of them looked like you drew it once and didn't bother to fix them. You did some actual animation when the daisy's hand fell and her eyes close...that was good. But a lot of the trailer was just tween animations on a loop...which comes off a little lazy. A little more fbf would make it stand out less and give more life to the characters (like make them blink at least once or something). Anyways I like this trailer, keep it up and good luck! :D
TheRuining
it was more of a trailer if anything. the finished product will be much better, not to mention voices and etc, so hopefully some of the non motion moments won't seem so dull.